A new poem
I have not been able to write poems for what ever reason............................
I just cam up with this one.......... I think it kind sucks but you tell me what you think....................
black eyes
I look into your blackened eyes only to see all
your pain and suffering.
like a black hole, sucking up all your joy , intel
Thayer is nothing but pain and misery.
I look into the darkness and
in the darkest shadow I see you there
hiding away in the corner.
hoping no one will see you there a tangled
mess of pain and lies .
every time I look into your eyes I see darkness, pain,
and misery in your blackened eyes
I just cam up with this one.......... I think it kind sucks but you tell me what you think....................
black eyes
I look into your blackened eyes only to see all
your pain and suffering.
like a black hole, sucking up all your joy , intel
Thayer is nothing but pain and misery.
I look into the darkness and
in the darkest shadow I see you there
hiding away in the corner.
hoping no one will see you there a tangled
mess of pain and lies .
every time I look into your eyes I see darkness, pain,
and misery in your blackened eyes


7 Comments:
Hi Michelle, I got your comments on my blog, nice of you to join the world of Web Journaling!
I used to write poetry myself, when I was your age. It was the only way I knew how to express myself and the emotions I was feeling. It's a good outlet; a good way to vent and get things out in the open. As I got older and better at relationships, I was able to talk to friends and God about my problems, and express myself that way. I haven't written a poem in a long time.
I have a prayer for you: I pray that you will know the peace of Jesus and that He will show you that HE is the Light, and there is nothing to be afraid of in that Light. He sees you exactly as you are and HE LOVES YOU UNCONDITIONALLY! So does your family, and so do I.
You have great talent, Michelle. See you soon!
Shawna
Wow Michelle...You have a great talent when it comes to poetry! BTW, I'm adding your blog to my links....
ODDBALL (AKA Eric)
BTW?
BTW means By the way...
oh ....see i am not very smart....lol
You are too very smart Don't ever think you arn't.
lol awwwwwwww how sweet of you to say that oddball
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