Thursday, March 16, 2006

My new poem


Sad girl
she takes a breath and walks away.
shows how low she'll go to be that ever HO
she takes the knife the note said its over
now she loved him with all her heart he was
her life her love her every thing . Now she'll
die alone in pain for ever




why


I sit here in this hell they call my life.
wandering why IM here , why I stay . I have no
purpose in life no reason to live.







sad soul

she looks into the mirror and crys out
"who is that girl I see staring start back at me .
as she slits her wrist she crys oh why am I here
take me away from this hell.make me nub cure my pain
take me away as plained


p.s tell me what you think ...... i would really like to no who this person is that post under anonimas


sorry about the spelling

4 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

I really like it! You should make a happy poem.....this one is sad, sad, sad, sad........what am I talking about, your the doing it!

5:18 AM  
Blogger beautiful_mistake said...

lol i like to write sad poems

12:31 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

oh....it's good just really not the thing to make you feel better but do what you want, I't not my blog.

11:52 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

(In response to "Why") I beleive that everyone has a perpose in life. You have a purpose too! I used to, and sometimes still do, think that I was worthless; used to question my being. I know that God will fullful my purpose; I only have to wait on him and do the best that I can. He'll fufill your purpose too! You can sleep well at night knowing that God won't let you die before you've served your purpose in life. He'll never forget about you! When you want to die; when you want to just go to that dark place in your mind, God WILL hold you close to him. But here's the tricky part...you have to LET him. In the end, It's your choice. No one else, not your parents, friends, or even God can make you choose to trust and follow him. That's how we know how much God loves us. Not only in his death and resurrction, but in the fact that he gives us FREE CHOICE. He loves you, and he'll never give up on you. I care so much about you. I hope that this message was not condeming in any way. I hope that you have a good day.

3:53 PM  

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