hallow hearts

hey read this really long poem i wrote to night.., ive been wroking on it all night....mom and dad really liked it.^_^ feels good to be able to write again.

Hallow hearts
By: Michelle bevins

Hearts hard and hallow,
Thie soul cold and shallow,
I reached for thee,
Called out thie name,
As you walked away in shame,
I fall to my knees in tears,
As im left with alone with all my fears,
Broken up inside,
I try to run and hide,
Hide from the fears that hunt me,
Oh why can’t you see,
That I truly need thee,

You break me down,
You see straight through me,
See all the pain and sorrow
That is deep within this hallow soul,


Please don’t leave me here alone,
Like a cold hard stone,
I’m dying, I’m crying,
OH GOD! I’m trying,
Trying hard to keep it real,
Trying hard not feel,
Feel the pain rising up with in me,

I truly need thee,
Please just hold me,
Let me sleep in thie arms,
Show me that love it real,
That I don’t have to be scared to feel,
That this broken heart of mine can heal,
Heal from all the wrong that was done to me,
That my eyes can see the sun,
That there is no reason to run,
No reason to hide,
From these feelings I feel inside,
That I’m not the only one,
Running from the sun,
Show me how to let time fly,
Show me how to touch the sky,
How not to cry,
Hold me close,
Arms around me tight,
Tell me every things going to be alright,
Please just stay with me one more night,
Until the sun shines so bright,
Please hide me from this light,
That shines oh so bright,
It burns my soul,
Like you light my fire,
You are my Altamont desire,
The way you burn my heart with your hot hot fire,
You make me love this world,
Make my heart sour higher,